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a piece of you by ~deviated1:icondeviated1:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


A piece of you to carry home,
Safe here in my hand,
A piece of you to hold tight,
A piece to think about tonight,
To wonder if it was right,
A piece to remember,
A piece to hold,
A piece for me,
A piece of you.

I want this piece,
With all my heart,
I fight for this piece,
Blind,
For this is not my piece,
It is yours,
It is your say.
Not mine.

I cant help but wonder,
Should I be sorry?

I cant help but ask,
Might I have another piece?
©2006-2009 ~deviated1
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Author's Comments

i love you lor,
this may be short of romantic... or even poetic for that matter... but it gets the point across.

Comments


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Mood: Tender ~KushielsScion16 Nov 26, 2006, 4:33:37 PM
It's gorgeous! I love it, and I love you! Tons upon tons upon tons! If nothing else, know that for sure ^.^. As for the reast...that I'm perfectly willing

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I can't hold up this facade any longer than a cheap whore can keep her customers happy
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Mood: Tender ~KushielsScion16 Nov 26, 2006, 4:33:50 PM
It's gorgeous! I love it, and I love you! Tons upon tons upon tons! If nothing else, know that for sure ^.^. As for the rest...that I'm perfectly willing

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I can't hold up this facade any longer than a cheap whore can keep her customers happy
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~deviated1 Nov 26, 2006, 6:36:10 PM
=^.^=

@>;-)-----

LLLL UUUU UUUU FFFFFFFFFF FFFFFFFFFF !!!!!!!
LLLL UUUU UUUU FFFFFFFFFF FFFFFFFFFF !!!!!!!
LLLL UUUU UUUU FFFF FFFF !!!!!!!
LLLL UUUU UUUU FFFFFF FFFFFF !!!!!!!
LLLL UUUU UUUU FFFFFF FFFFFF !!!!!!!
LLLL UUUU UUUU FFFF FFFF !!!!!!
LLLLLLLLL UUUU UUUU FFFF FFFF
LLLLLLLLL UUUUUUU FFFF FFFF 00

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i would rather fly with eagles through the snowy hills,
i would rather run with wolves between the trees,
i would rather be with trees than in the middle of noisy streets.
-korpiklaani
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~deviated1 Nov 26, 2006, 6:36:48 PM
GODDAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!! well it looked cute before i sent it.

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i would rather fly with eagles through the snowy hills,
i would rather run with wolves between the trees,
i would rather be with trees than in the middle of noisy streets.
-korpiklaani
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~conformistwhore Nov 26, 2006, 6:49:59 PM
Aw. :D

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Because after you've crossed some lines, you just keep crossing them. And there's no escaping from constant escape. Distracting ourselves. Avoiding confrontation. Getting past the moment. Jacking off. Television. Denial.
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~KushielsScion16 Nov 26, 2006, 6:51:34 PM
I still think it looks cute, lol. Lots of luff! Luff makes me happy

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I can't hold up this facade any longer than a cheap whore can keep her customers happy
:icondeviated1:
~deviated1 Nov 26, 2006, 7:09:42 PM
:blushes:

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i would rather fly with eagles through the snowy hills,
i would rather run with wolves between the trees,
i would rather be with trees than in the middle of noisy streets.
-korpiklaani
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~WonderlandEffYou Nov 28, 2006, 8:02:00 PM
sweet :]

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Live. Laugh. Die.
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